Narrative writing

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It was rainy day in Auckland and Daniel was slowly driving to work on his enormous yellow truck., it started to get thundery when he was going up to Glen Innes his huge window wipers didn’t work at that time, so everything started to get blurry for him.

Daniel was quickly driving in zigzags around Glen Innes, everyone was staring at him and it came to a point that Daniel had a car accident, when he had the accident he didn’t know that the cabbage at the back of his truck fell out and everyone who watched him by the footpath saw the cabbages flowing down the road, luckily he made it out alive, everyone around Daniel was scared and worried, there was other people who was screaming “ look at those cabbage”, Daniel was angry because he knew that had to pick it up,there was more than  100 cabbage so it was really hard for him to pick it all up, it wasn’t at the end when everyone who was watching Daniel kindly helped him pick up all the cabbage and when they finished Daniel returned the cabbage to the shop.