100 Words Challenge.
It was noisy morning in the country of Syria, i woke up to the sound of ambulance sirens, from nearby houses, i was wondering to myself what was happening, so i stood up and headed straight to the door, i was horrified with what i saw, the air was dark and there was smoke everywhere all the buildings were burnt and it felt like it was the end of the world, everything was gone, even my family.
Bula Vinaka, Kaliamata. My name is Reagan and I am in Totara 3.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing as it created lots of suspense. I also liked how you used a good amount of adjectives to describe the scene.
Altogether I think you have done an awesome job at the 100 words challenge.
Next time you could check that your I's are capital.
Other than that I think that the quality of this post was superb!
What was your favourite part about doing this challenge?
Noho ora mai
Reagan